You have made a very good start and you have managed to cover everything required whilst also explaining terms.
To improve: - you need to discuss narratives and series / stand-alone ads - lots more (plus accompanying evidence) needed for camerawork - lots of information has been used from the sheet, either take it out of put it into your own words - more is needed on the Ofcom slide - print screen sections of relevant BCAP code.
You have made a very good start and you have managed to cover everything required whilst also explaining terms.
To improve: - you need to discuss narratives and series / stand-alone ads - lots more (plus accompanying evidence) needed for camerawork - lots of information has been used from the sheet, either take it out of put it into your own words - more is needed on the Ofcom slide - print screen sections of relevant BCAP code.
Jack,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a very good start and you have managed to cover everything required whilst also explaining terms.
To improve:
- you need to discuss narratives and series / stand-alone ads
- lots more (plus accompanying evidence) needed for camerawork
- lots of information has been used from the sheet, either take it out of put it into your own words
- more is needed on the Ofcom slide
- print screen sections of relevant BCAP code.
EllieB
Jack,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a very good start and you have managed to cover everything required whilst also explaining terms.
To improve:
- you need to discuss narratives and series / stand-alone ads
- lots more (plus accompanying evidence) needed for camerawork
- lots of information has been used from the sheet, either take it out of put it into your own words
- more is needed on the Ofcom slide
- print screen sections of relevant BCAP code.
EllieB
Changes made - 26/02/15
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