This is a detailed and comprehensive job booklet with helpful and relevant information for aspiring 'media-ites'. The detail is good as it comes from reliable sources however, and you might be able to guess what I am going to say... you need to reference those sources to evidence that you didn't make it up and to show you are not intending to plagiarise. Please put sources under each job role.
Check your formatting and make sure pics aren't in front of text or breaking it up and try to put each job role on a separate page (use page breaks) and spread the text out / make it more 'in your face'.
Jack,
ReplyDeleteThis is a detailed and comprehensive job booklet with helpful and relevant information for aspiring 'media-ites'. The detail is good as it comes from reliable sources however, and you might be able to guess what I am going to say... you need to reference those sources to evidence that you didn't make it up and to show you are not intending to plagiarise. Please put sources under each job role.
Check your formatting and make sure pics aren't in front of text or breaking it up and try to put each job role on a separate page (use page breaks) and spread the text out / make it more 'in your face'.
Ellie
Changes made - 29/06/2015
ReplyDeleteExcellent - well done.
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