You have made a really good start here; you have covered everything needed and you have provided clear and well-chosen examples from your clip. In order to reach the top grade you just need to make a few additions; where you have discussed the techniques that are not evident in your clip, find a visual example from another source to show it in action. Also, make sure you have two images for any terms where there are two shots needed to fulfill a technique, e.g., eye line match cut, motivated edit etc. Really great report again Jack; you write clearly and put a lot of effort into your work.
Jack,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a really good start here; you have covered everything needed and you have provided clear and well-chosen examples from your clip. In order to reach the top grade you just need to make a few additions; where you have discussed the techniques that are not evident in your clip, find a visual example from another source to show it in action. Also, make sure you have two images for any terms where there are two shots needed to fulfill a technique, e.g., eye line match cut, motivated edit etc. Really great report again Jack; you write clearly and put a lot of effort into your work.
Ellie
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