You have made a really good start here and you have written an honest and clear reflection on your experiences. Well done.
To improve: - you need to embed your finished advert at the top of the post so the examiner can see what you are analysing - add a few more screenshots from your advert and audience feedback in the post to back up the points that you have made - every time you mention something that looked good or could have been improved, back it up with evidence.
Jack,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a really good start here and you have written an honest and clear reflection on your experiences. Well done.
To improve:
- you need to embed your finished advert at the top of the post so the examiner can see what you are analysing
- add a few more screenshots from your advert and audience feedback in the post to back up the points that you have made - every time you mention something that looked good or could have been improved, back it up with evidence.
Ellie
All changes made - 24/02/15
ReplyDeleteExcellent, well done.
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